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From denny1@home.com:
The human ships could do with a bit more detailing, they almost look like toys
(or perhaps they could do with a bit less detailing, to make them really look
like toys).

For the ship in the upper right being pierced by an alien critter, I'd expect
to see outgassing and bright explosions from the interior, not an inky
blackness...

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From mztyree@sedona.net:
Colors and center of interest are good.  I like the sense of something bright
behind the craft.  The right side of the image is confusing, though.

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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
Well, adventure and sorta war again. Too common.
The story is interesting though and the moral of the story pretty nice, so
please do what you say : forget about war games and war altogether. Well, you
know, I don't mean forget, but there is enough to remind us not to put more
again on my screen.
Another of these too dark images, I just did not bother brightening up my
monitor for this one. I'm sure it must have taken quite some time to realise
that type of stuff.

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From shipbrk@gate.net:
Nice use of colour; makes the image look very dramatic.

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
Good concept.

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From gshaw@monotix.co.za:
Perhaps some recognisable fragments of destroyed ships. The creatures going
through the
ships look a little wierd.
I would recomend putting pov aside before the exam. My marks dropped 20% in
my final year
'varsity because of POV.

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Interesting image to look at - the eye is drawn all over it. Technique looks
solid to a beginner like me. Maybe just a little more light on the ship in the
foreground would stop it being such a black space - or some inboard lights.

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From jull43@ij.net:
This is just an image with words around it.