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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
The motion is done very well.  The scales on the snake also look good.  I felt there was too much of a delay between the snake first hitting the cactus and jumping into the air.

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From gsingelm@t-online.de:
after smiling wholeheartedly about this nice tale i wondered: what has this got to do with adventure? if it weren't off topic you’d get full marks for originality
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From pterandon@yahoo.com:
Nice scenery.  The one thing is that the lighting/ finish is a bit off so that the snake looks like he's floating in midair if you stare at him long enough. 

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From ArizonaPain@Aol.com:
This was a part success for me 'cos i kept saying to myself ' a snake wouldnt react like that' nor would a cactus!