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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
Nicely done!  You've create an environment populated with plenty of objects.
Only suggestion for improvement is that the area looks a little too clean. 
Maybe some dirt on the floor, or some stains on the grate thingie below the
soda dispensers.  Oh... what's with that frame of mostly white between 21 and
22 seconds?  Is that a rendering error?
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From gsingelm@t-online.de:
it was fun to see the "matrix-take" with a plastic cup.
nice concept

the light is too bright. you could have done a lot with shadows.
the textures are a bit too clean. but i know that it is ahelluva lot of work to
get them dirty ;)

you should have shown the goal early on in the picture. i asked myself, why does
the cup enter the store? and what is the danger? and why did the chicken cross
the road?
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From pterandon@yahoo.com:
This is SOOO professional looking that it's strange to see it in this
competition.  It's tempting to view this as a portfolio dump. 



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From ArizonaPain@Aol.com:
Too long in some parts, meaning the same effect could have been had with less,
especially the build to the matrix twirl.