===== From povuser@gmail.com: Your modelling is good. I like the way you made the "shattered glass." Also, I think the idea of a caryard is excellent. It really shows the biggest. if not the worst, kind of junk. ===== From pbjunk@wowway.com: I really like the bush next to the gate. The corrugated fence also looks very good. I struggled with corrugated steel in my entry, and could have used your help. The trucks in the scene are great, but the cars could have used a little more detail such as headlights, antenae, perhaps more variation such as a hood up? It's too bad on the rendering times, as more grass would have looked very good. The sky also looks too overcast to have such strong shadows. ===== From file: Great background colors and atmosphere. The story isn't quite as strong. I'm glad you made it by the deadline though, 14+ days is a long time. ===== From file: Notable for lighting, composition, originality, textures, modelling