===== From dbn_3@yahoo.com: (1) I like the detail in all the pieces on the desk and in the description in the text file. (2) The window scene needs lots of work. (3) Tilt the camera a bit -- it looks very square. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Lacks the photorealism created by other more experienced raytracers, but it's a very good for a first "full" image. The only thing I would say looks awkward is the window, because the scene outdoors looks almost more like a painting since there's nothing there to really suggest depth (both the sky and sea textures look almost uniform out to the horizon). ===== From jyrehby@hotmail.com: Pros: Promising first entry! Nice composition. Interesting interpretation of the topic. Keep up the good work! Cons: As you stated yourself, textures and modelling could use some improvement, since the scene tends to look too flat.