===== From exether@demo.xandmail.com: Nice looking. The light is a bit strange. ===== From pbrasolin@yahoo.it: Really nice, but I think the water is a bit too wavy. //----------------Paolo Brasolin ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: This image suggests, but doesn't quite show, the content described in the (well-written) text file. I cannot find the "massive artificial bays" or the "constant bustle of commercial traffic". The "penthouses" and "airship cruises" are not realy evident to me. And I mistook the ships (which you rightly note are needed for a sense of scale) for rocks until I read the text file. I like the transition of colors on the water, but the foreground water seems too chalky grey and lacks reflectivity. Windows, flags, lighting, or other small details would be nice. The clumsily placed "Andrew Hay" should be replaced with "New Pacifica". It is a fantastical city with intriguing design and unusual lighting. I like it. Overall a disappointing but still appealing image. ===== From t.degroot@inter.nl.net: The water is not entirely convincing. You should see wave trains while now it is a random surface. Otherwise, the objects are well done. The scene in itself is somewhat standard futurism though. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Modelling and textures look good. Aside from the sudden fade from blue to yellow of the water, one other thing I feel could be improved is the smoke/fog layer at about the same height as the fighters. It seems too solid and too bright in some areas.