===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: I'm not sure whether the mill would work well, with the wheel being so deep in the water (usually the water is guided from above, not from below, to avoid issues with the water level). The factory is obviously an enigma, but could've used a little more detail. The lighting to the scene is good, it has atmosphere. ===== From tyler@cg1.org: Doesn't tie into the theme, little detail. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: I like the dark moody sky. The fog doesn't seem to match though. ===== From suso@suso.org: Enigma Factory? You mean the Enigma encryption machine? It looks like your river is overflowing. ===== From slone@hiwaay.net: Difficult to tell what's what, but the texture on the tall cylinders and wheel is nice.