===== From henry@unforgettable.com: i like the idea for the rain, but the stripes are a bit too long (i think): if they were shorter, it would look more like a photo. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: It would indeed have become better with more detail, and probably with a little more light work. But I am still always impressed when there are figures present. ===== From dapigg2000@yahoo.com: Hmmm. I don't have much to say either. Pretty blank looking. (Which in lonliness, that could be a good thing) ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: simple et bien vu: on a l'impression de déja avoir vécu ça. La pluie par terre est bien faite. ===== From tim.nikias@gmx.de: Nice idea, but the rain drops too straight IMHO. Otherwise pretty lonely... ===== From rclee@oklahoma.net: Good start. The textures look a bit too clean. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: Good detail on the buildings. The lights and rain streaks could use a = little work. Why are the cracks in the sidewalk protruding upwards? ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The rain effect is done nicely. The only problem is that the person does not look wet. Also, a stronger fog effect might help the rain look heavier. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice mood here, and the feeling of loneliness really comes through for me. The rain looks rather solid and white, but still helps to develop the concept. I like the texture used to make the sidewalk look wet. ===== From clem@dhol.org: Rain looks a bit too solid. Perhaps the figure should be a bit more central to the composition.