===== From cly@u.arizona.edu: I think you did great job with the image. I like the computer stuff that are included. I think the lighting looks awkward, maybe change the positioning, I really can't tell what mood this image should be in. ===== From pokorny@attglobal.net: An entry I like on the whole - especially the projected dream image. The lab just doesn't look quite right to me - perhaps because I have spent a fair amount of time in labs. I could ramble on for a while about real labs but I will cut it short by saying equipment for a test or experiment is usually jammed as close together as possible and very near the object under test. Perhaps think of the equipment you might see in a hospital intensive care unit. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Good concept, well-developed throughtout the scene. I like the use of small areas of bright colors against the grayscale tones of most of the background. Some of the curved objects appear a bit angular to me, though. Nice work overall. ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: Good lighting and the modeling.