===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Nice idea - textures need work. ===== From johnkbradshaw@hotmail.com: Needs work on lighting -- much too harsh (shadows too dark, image overall too dark). Use fill lights (shadowless), or radiosity. ===== From topher@csh.rit.edu: Interesting idea pulled off very well. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The toys are modelled well. One thing I would change is the background. It doesn't really look like wallpaper or the interior of a toy box. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Good work on the modelling of the marionettes. (The pirate in particular looks very nice.) Different textures would help the scene a lot, especially on the box and the day side of the small stage. Lighting could use some work, I think... the scene looks a bit murky in spots.