===== From kingofmycastle@gmx.net: Good, but the landscape could be more designed. ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: Try repositioning the crossbar of the flag support. In its current position, it looks like a bridge coming out of the castle. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Good work with the theme (though I am not satisfied by genre art). The snow is a good hint at 'fortress', with the night and mountains containing the formidable content. The castle seems even more impossible to enter, unless welcomed, due to the time and method by which the person arrives. I feel like telling the person to put some clothes on and scold against going outside in the snow at night. Of course the traveller is weary! Actually the person is lucky he or she is not dead.