===== From charliemc@prodigy.net: Good stuff. ===== From steve@neurotrain.com: A 15 T 12 C 18 Excellent mood, the setting is perfect. The camera angle difusses the action, unfortunately. And the people look to be flat. Technically the sub is awesome (except for the spectators in the windows), but I squid is really rough, modelling and texture. Concept - good idea. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice shaping on the sub and the octopus (although the tentacles seem rather angular in some spots.) I like the effect of the sun's rays shining down, and overall the scene has a nice murky feel. The inside of the sub as seen through the portholes seems rather flat, though, as do the lights around them. It seems odd that the sun's rays show up but the rays from the lights don't. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Good work. How about adding some small trails of bubbles, to indicate quick movement/action and to enhance the underwater look? ===== From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za: The tenticles of the octopus tend to be a bit blocky at the ends. Using a series of spheres would ahve been better