===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: I like the vulture. Try experimenting more with textures. Start with the ones that come with POV and make changes. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: I understand what you were trying to do. It just turned out a bit too cartooney ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice idea.... the texures and lighting need to be a bit more natural looking... horizon to harsh.... tumble weeds ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: It's good to see english, but it would be better still to improve on it (maybe on the french as well). ===== From jouni@mikrobitti.fi: A good feeling you got into this one. Some nicely modeled objects too. I would've paid additional attention to a more detailed texturing of the wooden objects, which now lack some contrast. The horizon could use some detail, too. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Striking use of color and a good eye for laying out a scene. The vulture and snake are kinda cute. The tumbleweeds are interesting but too obviously a spherical shape to them. ===== From clem@dhol.org: Very nice cartoony ghost town. The animals are funny and well don but could perhaps be more prominent. I like the bold use of color, particularly the yellow horizon and the vivid red sliver of sun. The tumbleweeds(?) are a bit too clean and round. ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Creatures look very cartoony - I don't know if this was intentional. The buildings look quite flat in the light. Some variation of colour and texture would help. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: Really like the feel to this image. The sahdow of the sand and the shadow of the tumble weed on the sand is great. So much of this is very simple, but it's been put together well and works well.