===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Pretty neat. The construction of the VCR cassette doesn't go well with the quality of the rest of the scene. ===== From sammy@cube.net: Nice idea. I particularly like the relative high amount of different objects on the desk (Post-It note). You may want to use some light bump maps to the desk though, as everything looks a lot too flat. ===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: Good job! I like the little touches, like the post-it note. In my opinion, the paper should have some texturing and maybe some wrinkles around the edges. The 'Top Secret' stamp should be blotched or otherwise imperfect. ===== From kosh@nesys.com: The details make it work. ===== From tina@tezcat.com: Mmm... more X-Files like stuff. Yummy. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: Whoops -- spelling error ("terrrestrials") -- tech deduction!!! :) Just kidding... the scene is very good! I really like the use of little details ("call your wife" -- cute!) Also, the use of patches is an excellent touch.... these small details add considerably to the sense of realism. I also like the variation in texture among the samples, the tape, the photos, etc. Nice baby, BTW! :) ===== From east103@dialaccess.com: Good use of the kids. However, since you were using real photos a little bit more detail to the texture on the objects would help, (i.e. the tape is too smooth, etc.) ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: On topic and well made. Using a document in a picture to tell the main element of the story dosen't seem to make a very artistic image. ===== From blaineholmes@hotmail.com: Nice objects on the desk. ===== From r@haka.saunalahti.fi: The photos look good, but everything else is too clean. There are no wrinkles in the paper, no scratches on the desk, even the cassette looks perfectly smooth. Also, the paper looks awfully fancy IMHO, more like a brochure than a report.