===== From witoslaw@kki.net.pl: Too artificial... ===== From jerry@hoboes.com: Nice tubes--but the surface of your water is practically invisible. It could probably use some texture or normal of some kind unless this is a *very* still day. I like your wall background, too. Texturing or objects? Looks good anyway. ===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: The wall looks great, but I was expecting to see it reflected in the pool. ===== From lg@pixar.com: Why are there shadows on the wall? They are totally unmotivated. It doesn't seem to fit any plausible light setup. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: Quite nice modelling, and a good brick wall texture. The water does not seem to reflect light. Real water does both reflect and refract light. ===== From pdolan@jps.net: Gaudy ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: Like it! ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: One thing would improve this image immensely: use a white or light-blue texture for the areas of the pool which are under the water. You will be amazed at the difference...