===== From jerry@hoboes.com: The ball, simple as it is, looks very nice. The grass? or whatever is at the edges could probably be made to look more like whatever it is supposed to look like :*) and the boat needs more 'weight' to it. ===== From amason@cs.uct.ac.za: the grass is quite nice, if it is grass. the water doesn't look much like water. the composition is not so good; arrange things better. don't understand the picture. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: I cannot quite make out the surface of the water. Either the ball is half submerged or the boat floats some centimetres above it. All in all quite an uninspired entry. I might have given higher values if you had added anything at all about how and what and why you did. ===== From pdolan@jps.net: I don't get it - what's it supposed to be other than a playpool? Try to include a description ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: Things are floating precisely ON the water, not in it. There's also NO transition between the water and the lawn. ===== From Varyk@aol.com: water is rather finely textured for this scale. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: The objects and outdoor scene remind me more of a pool than an aquarium.