===== From jroy@internauts.ca: You should have made your own models instead of using the one that came with the Ray Dream package. ;) ===== From jkittle@earthlink.net: Good concept, but work on your textures a bit. ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: Nice lighting. There must be a way to suppress all these mesh angles while rendering. ===== From jaime@ctav.es: Hmmm... nice idea. Perhaps the hand is too "meshy". Also the wood texture seems a bit blured. ===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: The frame in a hung ceiling doesn't work for me, I don't see it. I really like the concept, tied for my highest vote. ===== From arcana@sinbad.net: Pretty good image. I would have been happier to see you create the cars yourself than use stock models. The hand is nicely done, but could use a bit more softening to take away the triangularness of it. Add a fingernail to the end of the finger too. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Very stark image ===== From bill.marrs@pureatria.com: "I want that one!" Great tells-a-story-ness! Arm should be smooth though. ===== From msfl.bf@fasonet.bf: I like the idea. A shame that the arm and hand of the child came out so angular. ===== From r@regulus.its.uu.se>: The arm is actually reflecting the ceiling! Better use of texturing (especially the scale of the woodgrains) would improve all. Smoother triangles on the arm also.