===== From sonya_roberts@geocities.com: Quite nice. I like the bushes. ===== From kazemir@pde.com: I like the sky and the misty clouds. I am giving you points for the idea, and layout of the scene. I don't quite get the texture on the covered area, I think I would have added wooden shingles or something like that. (oh yeah, the moon is warped too) ===== From bill.marrs@pureatria.com: I'd rather see more of the dancer, and less of the shrubs. Having the camera be closer to the building would have been more appealing. Great concept though... ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: Good idea. A bit more light would have helped in the shadow of the house. By the way, your moon looks strange! ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: Soem how the overal composition isn't very appealing. Neither is it consistent. Bushes/grass in the foreground that ends abruptly, flat landscape in the background. ===== From pgrooby@trimble.co.nz: Hard to see what is going on. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: That dancer looks good! I think it would have looked better having some sort of real objects on the roof, though, not just a pigment. ===== From arcana@sinbad.net: Nice Image. It looks like the sky sphere, placement of the clouds and moon are too close to the earth. There a feeling of angular tipping that gives me the feel that they are too close. I've read through your text file, but could not figure out what the circular dip in the bush pattern was to the left of the gazebo. ===== From msfl.bf@fasonet.bf: I like the background landside a lot. Although it's a night-scene, the lighning needs more work to make more contrast. ===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: Seems a little too dark, I had to turn up the brightness on my monitor. Maybe that's my problem. I like the bushes and plants. The clouds are well done. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: A human not made by Poser? *gasp* Definitely gets across the "alone" concept. ===== From web_user@flex058.dijkgraaf.wau.nl: This scene shows once again how difficult it is to do more than a few (huge) plant-meshes in POV-Ray... The intended grass looks so little like grass that it may be rather a deterioration than an improvement compared to a flat green surface. It's quite disturbing to the scene. Overall, I find it a bit too dark and colourless... Your bush-meshes look fantastic, though!