===== From chipr@niestu.com: Excellent concept, middling execution. The broken bottle and the table-top are very good, the other bottle and the candle are not so good. ===== From tholal@bga.com: Great job with the broken bottle. The image on the wall is a little plain and flat and the double flame is kind of awkward. ===== From bill.marrs@pureatria.com: The lack of detail really hurts this one. ===== From ansellaa@acc.wuacc.edu: Love that "Dynamic Ribbon Device"! ===== From ucoakc00@mcl.ucsb.edu: The white powder doesn't appear very powder-like. Maybe add a few _tiny_ spheres and set them around the edges. ===== From amarok@geocities.com: Constructive criticism: the flame should be more transparent near the base, some gradient pigment would probably be good. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: The lying bottle looks like two nested very thin white plastic bottles, not like glass. The standing bottle filled with white powder looks more convincing. ===== From lpurple@netcom.com: The flame needs more work, and the Coke bottle glass should be greener. Good work on the jagged bottle edge and the candle wax texture.