===== From Markus.Altendorff@asamnet.de: OK, but needs some work when it comes to the animation. A lot of the moves go beyond the limits of "natural" bones... ===== From sshelby@shelbyvision.com: I liked the way the one fighter materialized from the wind, and also his flowing garments. The motion of the fighters is very well done. I noticed one glitch: one of the fighters goes through the other at one point. ===== From evilsnack@hotmail.com: There were a lot of technical flaws in this animation, including sudden jumps in motion, things passing through each other, etc. ===== From hawati_egypt@yahoo.com: nice storm ===== From jull43@tampabay.rr.com: Nice atmosphere so it works without a gamma tweak even though I needed a bit. The plasma fractal/fog opening works when keeping it dark. I don't know how to rate technical as you indicate it is learning but say parts were painted yet many of its features are quite advanced such as the cape motion almost as a throwaway element. Yet it is also implied to be a feature of Blender. I have barely touched Blender so I can't tell. Let me settle by giving you equal to the highest technical score I gave this round. If it was all yours from scratch, I under rated you. Apologies. ===== From pterandon@yahoo.com: You tried a lot of ambitious things-- hair, cloth, moving swords in hands. Some of it isn't well-executed. I gave you a very high score, but it is debatable whether it might have been better to execute flawlessly with a less ambitious project. ===== From deathray9@hotmail.com: A very good-looking animation, although with a few strange animations such as the animated hair, but the grass and the characters look good and are animated well. ===== From file: Notable for textures, modelling