===== From dearmad@sapere.com: 41 lights is overkill. Something closer to 2 or 3 should suffice. The "story" was confusing to me. Even after I read your description and watched it again it didn't link up very well for me. Gave you points for creating a person though. ===== From ian@escape-from-reality.co.uk: The main character looks nicely modelled. The camera movements are rather jerky - would look better if they were smoothed out. The room is rather bare, as we see in the final scene, and the door is very large. I would suggest adding some more details or use different camera angles so that not so much empty space is showing. ===== From OpenGLCoder@hotmail.com: I feel this animation needs some more work. It does not really seem to be on topic. Also, very little actually happens during it. (The first time I saw it, I was sure I had somehow only downloaded half of it, and tried again. Unfortunatly, no new sequences were forthcoming.) Perhaps if your animation had showed some of the other vacation machines in progress it would be better. ===== From rkf332@aol.com: What in the world? Just kinda curious but was this animation even supposed to be for the contest.