===== From manorton@jps.net: SHould have done a cool explosion when he hits the ground. ===== From dlauer@optonline.net: Crude but very cute. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: I liked the idea. The jeep bouncing back .... then the fall... nice... even if the special affects were lacking... what was the guy at the end suppose to suggest... just a guy shacking his head? ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Nice story. Don't understand what's on top of head of blonde guy. "Explosion" of robot upon falling is a bit hard to comprehend thematically. Poor contrast between dark car and black road. Actually, an excellent entry. It's when it's so close to greatness that I have a lot of bones to pick. Nicely expressive characters. ===== From ldnbruce@flash.net: Needed some texture. ===== From chipr@niestu.com: Cool concept, funny characters and action. The explosion could have used some work. And what's with the pink on the top of that guy's head? Nice to see characters that aren't just Poser models. ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: I like the idea. However, when the robot falls, it should land flat on its back on the ground, raising an enormous cloud of dust, instead of blowing up or falling through the ground or whatever it does currently. ===== From file: Great idea, one of the best stories around. The texturing ist strange (shiny trees?). But maybe the texturing is part of the whole concept. Notable for originality